Sets adrift my voyage,
Instincts guide me,
Lost in the open sea,
As bold as a lion,
Set sail again,
Going where the wind takes me.
Forbidden lands,
Cursed me with Eternal Love,
Cursed me with Immortality,
Cursed me with Sadness.
Set sail once again,
Lost yet again,
Spent the days searching,
Spent the nights crying,
Where,
Where is my Newfoundland?
Where I can find love,
And live happily ever after.
Blessed by the Gods,
Insight was my Newfoundland,
Heavenly beauties await me,
My Juno awaits me,
My Quest has ended,
But my conquest has just begun.
Fair maidens of the land,
I spread my Love,
For I am bewitched,
Bewitched with eternal love,
Bewitched with Immortality,
Bewitched with Sadness.
History repeats itself,
In life too often,
Bewitched with Eternal love,
Easily fall for a lady,
Bewitched with Immortality,
Easily left by a lady,
Bewitched with sadness,
HeartBroken to pieces,
And this story repeats itself.
Bad patches fill my soul,
Seek potions from Wizard,
But there is no cure,
Brought me to my knees,
and cried a horrible cry,
Heard by the goddess of Love,
She came to me,
Told her of the curse,
Pitied me,
Foretold me a cure,
True love banishes the spell,
For I must be patient,
For patience is Virtue.
My Lady will come,
the curse will be broken,
I shall love her eternally,
We shall live peacefully,
Life can be cruel,
Life too, can be a blessing.
By GeZee_MO 200899
Another one of my poems. I would love if anyone would like comment on it. Constructive or condemn, all is welcomed. If you understood the story behind it. Then probably I would share with you myside of the story.
Perhaps every tuesday could be poetry day here at SoulKonekShen. You'll probably realise that most of my poems are about love. Go figure. *LoL*Blush*
2 comments:
SiRT I've yet to read a poem based on MarCat hihihihihi... good job mate.. I can sense the "love"..
OK next poem u hafta hafta mention Brunei's heritage and culture and natural habitats.. like uh.. well I'm not good..
~~The sumboi sumboi floating in my minds...
The pacar on her hands....
The crunching sound of Kueh Sapit...~~
bla bla bla .. hahhaha belabih aku ani
Its very deep. Correct me if i'm wrong but i think you do feel things deeply. There's nothing wrong for being sensitive...its ok because your feelings will power your words and hopefully you will be able to string beautiful words together. You write well too. This is a talent few people possess.
Good luck on your blog and when i do have time i will continue to give comments...
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